This cut is overall pretty great but the perspective on her nose seems off.

I think the nose in the first cut is an example of an artist using a manga drawing "trope" while having it miss its original intent.
Kind of like how some artists draw a circle on the lips to indicate a glossy sheen, but it ends up looking like a pimple instead because they forget its function was to emulate a lighting effect... like what this nose effect was created for. A lighting effect.